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문제: Describe An Interesting Old Person You Met 1. Who this person is 2. When/where you met this person 3. What you did 4. And explain why you think this person is interesting

I'm actually studying fine arts at university right now, and a couple of years back, during our college's opening party, I had the chance to meet this amazing elderly lady named Miller. 

She was such an inspiring person who had this lifelong dream of becoming a painter since she was a little kid.

Despite the challenges she faced, she pursued her passion for art. We met at a corner table where she was quietly observing the vibrant atmosphere. 

As we spoke, she shared her lifelong love for painting and how it had shaped her journey.

also What fascinated me was Grandma Miller's dedication as a volunteer in her younger days, helping those in need

It was through these shared experiences with the people she met during her volunteer work that she found inspiration for her artwork. In her paintings, she skillfully portrayed the emotions and stories of those individuals, giving them a voice and bringing their untold stories to light.

Her unwavering dedication to her passion, her selflessness as a volunteer, and her ability to express others' stories through art were truly inspiring.

In conclusion, meeting Grandma Miller left a lasting impression on me. Her journey as an artist and her commitment to helping others through her artwork were remarkable examples of the profound impact of passion and selflessness.