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기준

Fluency and

Coherence

Pronunciation

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range

and Accuracy

Total

Score
(9점 만점)

　5

　5

　5

　5

　5

Comment

　Talk about an important year in your life.

How old you were .

What important things you remember from that from that yere.

What these things happened 

And say you think that year was important 

I'd like to talk about the most important event which was achieving hair certificate in my life.

The time When I  passed the certificate test was last year 

I  tried a lot of things to get a certificate

I can not memory remember the day that announced my acceptance of the certificant certificate after many hardships 

There are several reasons why I needed important certificate 

Firstly I  tryed tried certificate of hair because I needed second job and money.

Hairjob is making a lot of money so I decided try learned learning hair 

Secondly I  met my closest friends there

She is kind and takes good care of me 

Last but least I  will start to live independentlyit 

It will allow me to earn a  lot of money independently even when I  get older

For these reasons l think the most important occasion is getting hair certificate in my life