채점 기준 | Fluency and Coherence | Pronunciation | Lexical Resource | Grammatical Range and Accuracy | Total |
Score (9점 만점) | 6 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 6 |
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Comment | Part 2 Describe a holiday you enjoyed. You should say - When and where you went - Who you went with - What you did on the holiday and explain why you enjoyed this holiday. I’ve been in 순천 with my friend since we finished the covid-19. My friend and me really wanted to go to travel another region for a long time ago, but we couldn’t organise each of our schedule and suddenly covid-19 emerged so we were stuck in Daegu for 2 years. After that, Korea finally emerged escaped from covid-19, so we made a plan the very next day. When we arrived at 순천 we went to get some food directly. we’ve been to restaurant which was had a hole in the wall. My another friend who came from 순천 recommended to me this place and they didn’t let us down. After that, we’ve been to a filming location. The theme of this place was about Korean history. We were able to experience Korean history firsthand. We wore a hanbok and took a picture together. I cringed when my friend asked to stranger on the street for take taking a picture of us. It was the most fun place i’ve ever traveled. Next day, even though we had other plans, we had to go to a movie theater because the movie we loved that released on that day. We are film buff, so we gave up other plans. we were sure that we won’t regret this choice and this situation become became a happy memory for us. I realised after this travel, me and my friend will be a life-long friend. |
주어진 질문의 요구사항들을 이해하고 이를 모두 포함한 적절한 답안 작성해주셨습니다. 그렇지만 제시된 질문의 마지막 요구사항인 왜 즐거웠는지에 대한 설명들이 다소 간접적으로 나타나 있는 것 같아 여행에서 어떤 행복한 구체적인 추억들을 만들 수 있었는지 등을 부가적으로 언급해주신다면 더 좋은 글이 될 수 있을 것이라고 생각됩니다. 수고하셨습니다.