채점 | Fluency and Coherence | Pronunciation | Lexical Resource | Grammatical Range and Accuracy | Total |
Score | 6 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 6 |
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Comment |
Well, for that question, I’d like to talk
about a time when I had to pay a tuition fee for my master’s degree in
physiology. I was really busy because I had so much work to do for graduation
such as experiments, lectures, and dissertation. I was hectic enough to forget
to pay the fee by the deadline. And I was under the pressure that I should send
the money to the school at the very day. But as I said I had no time to go anywhere
even bank. I decided to use a mobile banking with my smartphone after all. It
was quite easy to make a process |
해당 질문의 요구 사항들을 모두 포함한 좋은 답변 작성해주셨습니다. 글쓴이가 실제 경험했던 상황을 자연스러우면서도 현실감 있게 묘사해주신 점이 인상적이지만 몇몇 문법적으로 어색한 부분들에 유의해 주시기 바랍니다. 수고하셨습니다.